This is so cute! Laney is adorable! Great idea in using younger kids in your PSA because bullying happens at that age too. There are two things that I am going to ask you to think about. One is getting a close up shot of the boy doing the teasing the first time he does it. We see him only from the back. I like how you started with a wide of Laney and then went to a close up. You need to do the same with that boy. I'd love to see him in a close up shot saying those words. Then you could cut back to him leaving her. The second is your shot at the end where Laney is waiting for her mom. Laney is smiling when she hugs her mom. Should she really be smiling after being teased like that? These are two minor things that could help your PSA. Can you reshoot those two shots? I don't know. If you can, do it. If it's too difficult to do, since you're working with that other boy, then leave it in. You do have time to do it though! Nice job!