I didn't post my other rough cut because it was a very minor change with the title at the end. If you were wondering why there's no Draft 1.
Topic: Kids conserving energy.
Issue: Kids are using energy not using energy too wisely and it’s doing some damage. Like, polluting the environment and wasting energy that helps us survive.
Story: Two kids will be coming out school and Kid 1 will say, “You want me to call my mom to pick us up?” Kid 2 will say, “Nah, it’s ok. As kids we can still save energy. So, let’s just walk.” Kid 1 will say, “You’re right, thanks for reminding me.” Then it fades to a close-up of Kid 1’s hand turning on the light. Then Kid 1 sits down and you will hear Kid 2 say, “save energy” again. Kid 1 will then say, “wait” and opens the blinds. Then Kid 1 sits down and texts Kid 2, “I remembered what you said and opened the blinds instead of using energy.” Then Kid 2 texts back, “good job.” Lastly the title will fade on saying, “Together we can save energy.”
Message: Together we can save energy.
Topic: Solar Energy.
Issue: We are starting to not use energy as wisely as we should. We use a whole lot of fossil fuel everyday that hurts our environment. So, why not go solar? It will help save money and our environment. We are not realizing how powerful our sun is and how we can take advantage of it.
Story: First of all, there’s probably going to be a reporter in the whole video. The reporter is going to be saying the information while the story in going to be happening in the background. The story is going to be somebody just turning on a bunch of lights, turning on the tv, ect. Then the reporter is going to point out the bad things about fossil fuel. Then the reporter is going to tap the person on the shoulder and say the benefits of solar. Then the person says, “Wow, I should really go solar.” Then the message comes on.
Message: Make the right decision and go solar