I didn't post my other rough cut because it was a very minor change with the title at the end. If you were wondering why there's no Draft 1.
Topic: Kids conserving energy.
Issue: Kids are using energy not using energy too wisely and it’s doing some damage. Like, polluting the environment and wasting energy that helps us survive.
Story: Two kids will be coming out school and Kid 1 will say, “You want me to call my mom to pick us up?” Kid 2 will say, “Nah, it’s ok. As kids we can still save energy. So, let’s just walk.” Kid 1 will say, “You’re right, thanks for reminding me.” Then it fades to a close-up of Kid 1’s hand turning on the light. Then Kid 1 sits down and you will hear Kid 2 say, “save energy” again. Kid 1 will then say, “wait” and opens the blinds. Then Kid 1 sits down and texts Kid 2, “I remembered what you said and opened the blinds instead of using energy.” Then Kid 2 texts back, “good job.” Lastly the title will fade on saying, “Together we can save energy.”
Message: Together we can save energy.