As we talked about in class, this is a little confusing when you use energy in the beginning when we're talking about them walking instead of riding a car. The energy I'm thinking of is their energy, not the energy needed to drive a car. We talked about changing the message and not using the word together because we really don't need anyone else to help us conserve energy. Each of us can do it by ourselves. We talked about using the light switch as the way they conserve energy in multiple ways with the message at the end being something like, "It takes all of us to conserve energy, one switch at a time". Good luck!