Most shots are solid but be careful of using shots where you zoom in. You also have some jump cuts of Mia where the shot doesn't really change in terms of the angle you used but they jump because they are slightly different from shot to shot. The story is somewhat clear. I think you dwell on Mia being alone a lot. It does take awhile for the group to notice her and eventually invite her in. I think there could have been maybe a chance to use a shot behind her where we can see her looking in the direction of the group with the group in the background. You also tended to use the same camera angle for a lot of your shots where the camera is higher than the subjects. I'd like to see you use more creative shots next time where we can see things from a different perspective. Overall it was a good project. 3.6 points.